Squished ~ #Tanka #Prompt

Posted by Kelly on May 21, 2018

A series of tests
Measuring circulation
Strangling optimism

Every fragile heartbeat squeezed
Fighting for release and life

Inspired by: Ronovan writes weekly prompt #202

Musing: Myocardial ischemia

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4 responses to “Squished ~ #Tanka #Prompt”

-Eugenia says:

June 8, 2018 at 6:19 AM

Excellent tanka and love your blog. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.

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Hemendra Dibaakor says:

May 22, 2018 at 8:45 PM

Learning to write tanka.. nice read🖤

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- Kelly says:
  
  May 23, 2018 at 5:25 AM
  
  Thanks! 🙏 As long as you can pivot/turn on the 3rd line and connect the top and bottom lines of the poem/story and count syllables you’re all set. 😉 I enjoy these short poems the most.
  
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  - Hemendra Dibaakor says:
    
    May 23, 2018 at 5:57 AM
    
    Thanks for tips.. I will keep it in mind.. thanks again.. welcome at scattered words 💞
    
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