A series of tests
Measuring circulation
Strangling optimism
Every fragile heartbeat squeezed
Fighting for release and life
Inspired by: Ronovan writes weekly prompt #202
Musing: Myocardial ischemia
by Kelly L
A series of tests
Measuring circulation
Strangling optimism
Every fragile heartbeat squeezed
Fighting for release and life
Inspired by: Ronovan writes weekly prompt #202
Musing: Myocardial ischemia
Excellent tanka and love your blog. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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Learning to write tanka.. nice read🖤
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Thanks! 🙏 As long as you can pivot/turn on the 3rd line and connect the top and bottom lines of the poem/story and count syllables you’re all set. 😉 I enjoy these short poems the most.
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Thanks for tips.. I will keep it in mind.. thanks again.. welcome at scattered words 💞
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