The Cave (Picture it & write)

By: Jonathan Taylor Sweet

Freezing, numb, and trembling, in the deep-dark recess of the cave, she watched as the night dissolved to reveal first rays of the morning light. The flickers of light chased some of the sadness away, and was replaced with a glimmer of hope. She shuffled her nearly immobile and weakened limbs forward, easing out of the darkness, stepping into the light, and that’s when she saw him standing at the mouth of the cave, waiting and keeping watch over her throughout the night.  He didn’t dare force her to come out and knew that she would in her own time. As she approached he saw recognition register first, then disbelief, and under it all was immense gratitude that shown in her eyes.  Relief flooded him and all of the doubts that plagued him throughout the night were cast aside. They stood in silence, on opposite sides, watching the sun rise and push the suffocating fog away. He knew she was not ready, so he didn’t push.  He would be holding her hand though, when she was ready to step out of the cave and fully into the light – where she would shine, when it was time.


Absolutely loved this week’s photo prompt from Ermilia’s blog.


Published by Kelly

“I’m just a girl in the world…that’s all you’ll let me be...” Southern California Native who gets in trouble for sarcasm, suffers from bouts of OCD, and listens to an eclectic range of music really, really loud especially while driving too fast. Turn up the Rap, R&B, Punk, Billy, Indie, Alternative, Classic, Folk, Metal, and Grunge, Melodic, Industrial, Electronic, Soul and so on you get the point.

7 thoughts on “The Cave (Picture it & write)

  1. I feel like this short story was a great metaphor for obstacles in our life. For rising to the challenge when we need to. And hopefully having someone to support us through it. Lovely contribution! Thanks for sharing. 🙂

    – Ermisenda

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